Patience is an important personal quality for living in a foreign country . There are many reasons to choose patience . First , most students feel homesick , so If you do not have patience you can not stay in a foreign country . Seccond , of course you will make new friends , therefore you should have patience to know their culture and how to deal with them . Third , If you do not stay with a family you need to have patience to make cook and to clean . Finally , I think patience is a virtue and an important personal quality for living in a foreign country .
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