Tuesday, June 23, 2009

My Trip

I would like to write about trip with my homestay last week which was one of the best trips in my life . First , we left Kamloops by car and we followed the beautiful Thomson River . Next , we arrived at the large Shuswap lake . We saw a lot of scenery and house boats . Then we had lunch in Salmon Arm . Also we enjoyed the town of Enderby . Finally , therefore It was one of the best trips in my life .
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  1. SalmanJune 24, 2009 at 11:10 AM

    Dear Mohammed,

    You went to one of the biggest lakes in British Columbia. I really like your paragraph.
    I think if you don't put it ordinary, it will be better.

    Salman

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