Monday, May 18, 2009

Big Difference

There are a lot of difference between my life in Canada and my life in Saudi Arabia . I would like to write about the major difference . In saudi Arabia I stay with my family that is really important thing for me . Now in Canada , I miss that beacause I stay a lone . Anyway , my family makes lunch every Friday and my , cousin , uncle , aunt and grandmother come to lunch . Also we sometimes go to beach , so I miss all these here .
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  1. Bruce ThomsonMay 25, 2009 at 12:16 AM

    Mohammed
    A good paragraph. You explain these differences very well. I have a few suggestions on your writing:
    I would like to write about a difference - not the difference. do you know the difference between using a and the?
    I stay alone - one word. me - not my
    I miss all these things here.
    Bruce.

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